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[Criticism Needed] I want your honest opinion on my UI.

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I've been working on this for a bit, not finished ofc. This was made in figma and will be recreated in wpf. I want a honest opinion on the two designs.

What should I improve?
Which do you prefer?

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Haruka

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The design of the page could use some work. Everything on the page looks the same, making it hard to know what's important. There's not enough space between things, which makes it feel crowded and difficult to read. The text isn't lined up consistently, which makes it look messy and unprofessional. It's not entirely clear what the page is about, and adding a title or heading could help with that. The font used for the text might be difficult for some people to read, so using a more readable font could make it easier for users to understand the information on the page.

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@Haruka. Thank you, I will take this into account.

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what haruka said yes do research on UX and design fundamentals on youtube and colour hierachy specifically, itll only take 20 minutes or so. you have some foundations for being a UI designer but haven't grasped things completely yet, you won't imrpove with time but rather with research  and practice. I'll be looking forward to future designs, and when you do make them, please post in graphics (:

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@Akula, No offense, but I will never watch a youtube tutorial. (Videos complicate things, I prefer to read) I have read pdfs about UX designing tho. Also, I don't want to be a UI designer. This UI is just for my business. Also**, sorry for posting in hangouts. Thanks for your suggestions.

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@Lolegic,

No offense taken but I find that reasoning to be very flawed. That's a huge generalisation you just made there, and you can get equally benefiting information about UI fundamentals from pdfs, but it looks like those haven't helped you in some aspects (no offense lol just a neutral standpoint willing to see u imrpove). The UI being for your business gives you even more reason to hone it to be even better to make the literal 'face' of your business even higher quality - otherwise just pay someone who knows what they're doing, like i said the UX is like the face / means communication of ur product Here's some documents you can read on color hierachy and fonts (this is what you need based on what i see):

     https://uxdesign.cc/fundamentals-of-typography-in-user-interface-design-ui-67cdd13bfa24

     https://uxdesign.cc/fundamentals-of-color-in-interface-design-ui-8127149f13e6

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@Akula, I've heard a lot about typography. I heard that Serif fonts often convey professionalism, so I may use serif fonts. As for a proper colour pallete I was thinking more towards blue and black. Since blue is often associated with trust and security, while black evokes a sense of sophistication and professionalism. I may use proper iconography aswell. Since my business is based on security, maybe a few security icons like a Lock or shield. Thanks for your suggestions. Also, no offense taken.

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@Akula. Also, the only reason I prefer not to watch a yt tutorial is mostly a personal preference. I usually only learn things by reading. Videos haven't done me very good tbh.

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@Lolegic, changed somethings quickly in paint. net hence the bad quality but i think u see what im getting at. and the button too https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/981901940214612129/1078787697784651856/image.png

 

the fonts fine by the way just fix sizing

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@JJSploit_On_Top, my bad i meant colour choice / usage - as in given specific chosen colours there should be a hierachy between them e.g. a dark gray UI (most colour in ui) with light gray buttons and labels (second most colour in ui) and a blue accent colour( rarely used, only for important 'look at me' elements) hows that sus tho lol

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@Akula, What do you think of this?

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